Pitching lesson

Today we pitched our ideas to the class and our teacher. As a group we peer marked othergroups in our class on how well we thought they had researched and planned. We putcomments and gave them a mark from 1-4.

Here is our feedback from the groups in our class and our teacher Michelle....Michelle:

' comparative images are v.good''myspace/twitter for audience research- need a bit more on

this.'
'blog design is good''labels= good'
'drafts of digipack would be good'
'incorporating an 'edge' into digipak design'
'logging progress- e.g. change of ideaGroup1 feedbackreally well presented blog- looks good. good colourscheme''good @ keeping a log/track of progress

good target audience research/genre researchlots of album art research/digipaksmore relevent research for the target audience
initial sketches for album art/storyboard/magazine advert
colours/costumes
good picture/text/media balance
Group 2 feedback
'Great layout and image backgroundscolour scheme is good
relevant research
detailed and specific.'

Group 3 feedback
'Alot of detail, good blog, blog colours are good.
strong ideas, ideas need to be blogged.lots of blog work and well written
did alot of research eg. got other peoples opinions pie charts and shizz, good photos. level 4 :)'

Group 4 Feedback
' Good research and linking ideas with the artist- feedback
photos of location (bandstand)- research more into where to film. artist in video?
good use of audience research- genres etc. and interviews'

All the pictures are of print screen shots of our presentation. This was our pitch to the class about our whole blog and ideas for our music video.